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Take my hand and let's fly away to a land full of dreams.
Where reality is fantasy and nothing's what it seems.
Where sorrows are like snowflakes that melt away with the warmth.
And life is full of wonders, no one knows what's in store.
Perhaps in that faraway kingdom, I can finally be free.
Of the chains that bind me down, rules of society.
Where we can both love freely, with no troubles, woes, or pain.
And life is one full of sun instead of eternal rain.
Alas, this land is fantasy, for this world does not exist.
Tis only an ephemeral dream that always will be missed.
For like the wind, dreams like to play and then disappear.
And so we're stuck inside this land of neverending fear.
And so my dream, my dream is sweet because my dream lies in my mind.
But if my dream were to be true, a nightmare I would find...
©2008-2009 ~DeceptiveFeelings
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I hate the ending...
If you dont get it, what I meant is "If my dream were to come true, my dream would be a sweet dream no longer"

We humans wish for what cant come true.
Get it?
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i do!!!!! its so good! i love it!!!!! actually i think that my favorite part of the poem is the last few lines... to me it really seems to hit a the nail on the head if you get what i mean! lol

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Constantly putting myself down
I don’t need your help
To break my heart
I’m doing just fine on my own.
Aww thank you so much! :hug:

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

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Oh dreamer of dreams, thou hast conjured up a sweet dream. Its like a fairytale where dreams must end. Its neat and flows well. Well done, you poetic thing! :rose:

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
Aww thanks Rob! :hug:I musn't lie--you inspired some of this :D

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
This has been featured in my journal today: [link]

Please let me know if you wish for it to be removed. :D

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:sun:
The happiest people don't have it all
they just make the best of what they've got.
:sun:

Thank you =Blackmago for the avatar! :heart:
Wow...I'm speechless...Thank you so much!

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
I did? Wow, then my living has not been in vain!! :rose:

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Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.
:XD: Dont ever say that again! You live to create beautiful pieces of art. Both literary and visual.

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
Aww thank you, huni pot' :hug:

--
Those who are good at liberating people, are also good at enslaving them. Plato.

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