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Staring at the blood lilies, that lie dead on the floor.
Little silent beauties, I wont see anymore.
Feathers outside falling, the ground is filled with tears...
The angels, they are crying, letting go of their fears.
It seems that I'm losing...when I thought I could win...
It seems that I've lost my song.... It seems I've lost him...
But today was different; today I felt his heart.
It was pure, but broken. It needed a new spark.
For once alone, he gave me a full and loving stare.
I didn't know what would happen,Then he told me he cared...
My heart gave a flutter, my spirit slowly quaked.
There was the boy who loved me; who once brought me heartbreak.
His words were clean and truthful. His heart was torn, but pure.
And in his eyes I saw Love; but he was still insecure.
Hail! the angel's knocking! My front door lies closed and locked.
Hidden by old solemn lies, there I stand, still blocked.
He's trying to fix this, and trying to amend.
Showing that he can also make, as well as bring things to an end.
Oh! you said you loved me, then tore me part by part...
Now here you are standing, with my bleeding heart.
Saying "Please forgive me. I've learned my lesson well....
Take my hand and rid me, of my life in hell..."
Trying to hold the tears back, emotions here live on.
Even when you killed me, they were never gone
Love holds for an eternity, I swore I'd be with you.
Now I know this blindly, and I believe it's true.
One more hill up the coaster. One more time before we'll fall.
One more time I'll feel secure, and then I'll lose it all...
One more time you'll lie to me, and I’ll heed your words for fear.
Darling, I just hope you know., I'm happy when you're here.
So let me sing that melody, that made your heart skip a beat.
Let me sing that sad, sad song, let me swipe you off your feet.
As I hold you tightly, one more time before I lose.
If I had to live alone forever, instead, loving and dying for you I'd choose.
©2007-2009 ~DeceptiveFeelings
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Submitted: June 11, 2007
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I wrote it for Taylin ^//^

Pic isn't by me I found it on PhotoBucket.com

Edit: Edited Jan 27 08
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aw...its so sad .. but cute D:.. you write to good.. gimmy soma ur tallent ....

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[Jynx] I'm not crazy!!!.... its just the voices that say to kill those people.. they say your next! 0-0 i'll try to object... but they're just so convincing...
Lol Brain transplant!!!!! Thanks Brandy~!

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

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if only...heh.

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Today I learned how it feels to want to let go so bad, but have someone there to catch you when the rope breaks before you do. I love you Cain.
u like or no? oo

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
i faved it! of course i like it, it's just sad.

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Whne you're lost inside, you find yourself, and then you know you're not alone when you cry.
huzzah!

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
lol. ok then

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Whne you're lost inside, you find yourself, and then you know you're not alone when you cry.
Wow...This is amazing

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“A foolish fox is caught by one leg, but a wise one by all four”
Serbian Proverb quote
Wow thank you very much. It's one of my unnoticed poems...sad since I am so proud of it!

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:

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