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Little feathers dancing, falling flames across the sky,
Dreams so softly screaming; Angels seem to die.
Here, I am standing, alone, averting your gaze.
God is trying to wipe away the past; Erase.
White flies across the ocean. Foam spurts; out clouds of blue.
Ravens rise like phoenixes in hunger of finding you.
Fayt is stringing her harp, and the melody of her voice, a curse.
Every where you turn to, things get worse and worse.
Look into the eyes of your love and bid them farewell.
Soon, all this will be over. Soon you'll be in hell.
No one ever bleeds; they just cry red tears.
Forget all your troubles; embrace all your fears.
Fly across the ocean: despite your tattered wings,.
An angel that is heartbroken strings her harp and sings.
Slowly, you'll keep on falling. The sea will catch you now.
Water is an element that cleanses darkness somehow.
Flame ripples across the aqua, dancing, twisting, in the sky.
Angels with black tattered wings spread their dreams far and wide.
Little children sleeping, demons pray for their sins...
You don't believe in anyone? You're only lost within.
Soon this shall be over; this world put to an end.
Fayt shall draw her sword, and cease the game of pretend.
A fake calm rises over, Neptune stops the storm,
Maidens calling out, Damsels in the morn'.
Oh! the goddess sheds her tears and they fall upon the sea,
Forming new strands of hope, threads for our many strings.
The world is starting over, and about to renew,
Sunrise reaching Twilight, I am reaching you.
Turn back just one more time, look into my eyes,
Throw yourself down that cliff, spread your wings and fly.
I step onto the ocean, your eyes stare from under the sea.
I step into the ocean, soon you will be with me.
Mermaids sing of beauty, Hades terrifies the rest
I hold your hand tightly, and bind it across my chest.
Our hearts barely beating, I can feel life fleet with yours.
Fayt has strung her harp, it wasn't really my choice.....
Then it all ceases, nothing stops in its place.
God is trying to cleanse the earth; Erase.
And now I'm staring blindly, yet in a way I see all
Dancing with the ocean, backwards we all fall.
Wings now open widely, and now I can see:
I look behind at you, you smile back at me
One heart beats in our chest. One heart that we share;
Forever and all eternity, you will be standing there.
Fate has reached her calm, one last time, she’ll play her strings.
She says her final words, she softly last sings.
Feathers then stop falling, Fire blazes one last time.
I stare at you, before I fall, before I forget you once were mine.
©2007-2009 ~DeceptiveFeelings
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^^U yep its pretty long. I wrote it last night out of complete boredom, but i liked the way i integrated greek mythology in [kinda :p] As for the girl in the picture, o.o I dont know WHO she is but shes pretty ^_^

Thank you!

For: Taylin

I'm really proud of this poem, to this day.

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Little feathers dancing, falling flames across the sky
Dreams so softly screaming, angels seem to die
Here as I am standing, alone and averting your gaze
God is trying to wipe away the past… Erase
White flies across the ocean, foam spurts out clouds of blue
Ravens rise like phoenixes, in hunger of finding you
Fayt is stringing her harp, and the melody of her voice, a curse
Every where you turn to, things get worse and worse
Look into the eyes of the person you love, and bid them fare well
Soon all this will be over, soon you’ll be in hell
Nobody ever bleeds, they just cry red tears
Forget all your troubles, embrace all your fears
Fly across the ocean, try with tattered wings,
An angel that is heartbroken, strings her harp and sings
Keep on falling, the sea will catch you now
Water is an element, that purifies darkness some how
Flame ripples across the aqua, dancing in the sky
Angels with black tattered wings spread their dreams far and wide
Little children sleeping, demons pray for their sins
You don’t believe in anyone? You’re only lost with in
Soon this shall be over, this world put to an end
Fayt shall draw her sword, and cease the game of pretend
A fake calm rises over, Neptune stops the storm
Maidens calling out, Damsels in the morn’
Oh, the goddess sheds her tears, and they fall upon the sea
Forming new strands of hope, threads for our many strings
The world is starting over, and about to renew
Sunrise reaching Twilight, I am reaching you
Turn back just one more time, look into my eyes
Throw yourself down that cliff, spread your wings and fly
I step onto the ocean, your eyes lifeless under the sea
I step into the ocean, soon you will be with me
Mermaids sing of beauty, Hades terrifies the rest
I hold your hand tightly, and bind it across my chest
Our hearts barley beating, I can feel life fleet with yours
Fayt has strung her harp, wasn’t really my choice
Then everything ceases, nothing stops in its place
God is trying to cleanse the earth… Erase
And I'm staring blindly, yet in a way I see all
From the ocean, backwards we all fall
Wings now open widely, and now I can see
I look behind at you, you smile back at me
One heart beats in our chest. One heart that we share
Forever and all eternity, will you be standing there
Fate has reached her calm, she pulls one last time at her strings
She says her final words, she softly last sings
Feathers then stop falling, Fire blazes one last time
I stare at you, before I fall, before I lose the fact that you were mine


Revised: 1/14/09

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Its... 'fate'. o_o

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"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference."

— Elie Wiesel
i spelled it wrong on purpose Xp

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
BRAVO!!!! :+favlove:

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w00t! <laughs> thank you ^^

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
...Wow.

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"The opposite of love is not hate, it's indifference."

— Elie Wiesel
wow wut? @.@

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
yeah man!! pretty nice job, congrats!!!

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Je suis le fils désobéissant
muchas gracias XD

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Far away, this ship has taken me far away,
far away from the memories
of the people who care if I live or die.
And Starlight, I'll be chasing a star light,
until the end of my life.
I dont know if it's worth it anymore.
-Muse

:heart:
*speechless much*

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